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I have just read a book called Knocked out by my Nunga Nunga’s. It is written by Louise Rennison it is a life story and does have bit of comedy in it. The structure of this book is in diary entries. 

The plot
 

The plot of this story is that there is a girl called Georgia and she went to Scotland to visit her boyfriend Robbie but things don’t go quite as she aspected.  

The main characters in this book are called:

¨      Georgia

¨      Jas

¨      Robbie

¨      Vati and Mutti

¨      And many more.

The main event in this book is when Georgia goes to Scotland visit Robbie. I like this section because it is funny but quite confusing in some places as some of it is in French.

I recommend this book to 12-16 year olds.  As in some parts it is quite rude and romantic.

But this is a really good book and would recommend it to anyone.( you will not be able to put the book down and will have to read the next books in the series)

Igive this book a ***** 5 star rating. 

In my stories i am going to try and improve my punchuation. I am also going to try and keep my readers at the edges of their seats. I will try not to use the same word or phrase over and over again.

Sam got to the bottom of the stairs he slowly pushed the kitchen door open. What Sam saw made him panic the whole kitchen was covered in a red liquid,Is it blood? What has happened? Has anybody got killed? Sams mind popped with questions he had no option but to run!

Sam turned around and ran back up the stairs 

Slowly, Sam put his foot on the cold, hard, wooden stair not knowing what he was going to find when he got down the bottom of the stairs. The stairs creaked as he silently sneaked down the side of the stairs. Suddenly he hears the noise again this time it is worse it sounds like a shrieking mouse who has just come across a cat. What is the noise that Sam is hearing nobody knows!  

Sam hesitated at the top of the stairs, blinking sleepily in the darkness. The blackness below was absolute, there was no light at all. The light switch was out of reach, way back across the landing. There was the noise again. The rest of the house was silent. What was it?